MrMadness419

I you know I think should just finish up with the first act first before posting anything else. I need to perfect it with out anymore stress that even people won't say much about my work. But I promise that I make great as it can be with my own creative mind however it's questionble it can be. Over and out for now.

JakClaemore

I don't mean to sound pushy but are you still planning on posting?

MrMadness419

@JakClaemore no no it's fine, I get it. I feel the same way just about any story, movie or what not. At the moment I reached the end of the first arch but have no idea how to end it. 
            
            Mainly so many possibilities of how I should end it rather than for the sake of ending it. You know what I mean?
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JakClaemore

Hello @MrMadness419, I haven't read your story yet and asked about updates because I don't want to invest in something that doesn't have a proper end.
            
            Sorry if that sounds mean and thanks for replying
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MrMadness419

@JakClaemore yes hello, how are you? No one ever contacted me about it so excuse me that I'm rather surprised.
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MrMadness419

I you know I think should just finish up with the first act first before posting anything else. I need to perfect it with out anymore stress that even people won't say much about my work. But I promise that I make great as it can be with my own creative mind however it's questionble it can be. Over and out for now.

MrMadness419

So anyone has any thoughts on this story so far? I'd like some feedbacks on everything that you find interesting or questionble. Either way, it's good to hear some thoughts on this. I do appreciate if you kindly do have the time to write them down. Thank you.

MrMadness419

i have post another one, this one is a tough one since i had to switch to a different style of writing so, i'm going to be stuck with that from here on out. and i might going to update this in the future but not now or soon as of yet. regardless, enjoy this one of what might going to be tough nail for our greedy lad.

Inkbreak420

This may sound scandalous to say. But I have just made my first book and I would like to shamelessly plug it in your chat. Do mind if I do so?

MrMadness419

@Inkbreak420 can relate
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Inkbreak420

Yeah. I don’t plan on announcing anymore chapters anyway. I’ll let Wattpad do the work instead. But even so I promise to try and take everyone’s criticism and use it to add to my story as even now parts are still not truly complete.
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MrMadness419

@Inkbreak420 go a head, i would like to see it myself when i have time. just don't go over bored with notifying the next page of your work.
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DExter1283

No offense, I really love you’re story and all but half  the time I read it, it barely reminds me of Splatoon at all,

MrMadness419

@Inkbreak420 I'm more confused then affected really, but he doesn't seem to answer a genuine question after sometime. so I'm not even certain if has an answer it all.
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Inkbreak420

We all perceive the same thing differently. Don’t be to affected by it. He merely just can’t relate as his perception is most likely more to something like the manga.( I apologies if my assumption was wrong)
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MrMadness419

@DExter1283 no seriously what exactly is a splatoon story to you? The usual thing? Like what? Great zap fish being kidnapped and all that is there. So what else is a splatoon thing to be here?
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