@MrMel105 i see you've gone to the horror/dark fantasy route! nice! some tips to make a description would start off with a hook, like a relatable question or a quote, or start off in the setting of your story. like in my description i started it off in The Between, the setting of my story. Use strong sensory details and emotions to hook ur reader. Some quotes that might match ur stories genre would be: "Evil only has the power we give it." "Sometimes dead is better." "Some wars are won alone." this might sound like cheating, but also AI could help, i think they may give helpful tips and description ideas [its what i heard]. ending with a spine chilling question would also hook ur reader, like in my description the ending asked if 5091 was really the human he was portraying himself to be. would you mind telling me some or the main characters, the setting, etc? i am totally okay helping you make the description!
