@rtomford71 I like it and it ties in to something I wanted to do. I’m a sucker for the trope where someone in captivity learns to love their captor, but not in the Stockholm syndrome way. I had an idea similar to this where the main pred decides to leave the main prey alive as someone of service, but it was a sex slave and very rapey which I wasn’t comfortable with. I think if I do rewrite the chapter I’ll use a few ideas from your version and incorporate it if you’re comfortable with that, I don’t want to steal ideas or anything and it will be a chapter of Sickly Sweet, which is an anthology series. And if I do post the chapter it will take many months because I can’t be bothered lol. Also I’m ok with writing anything really, hard, soft, willing and unwilling, just nothing that violates sexual assault or rape.
