Mr_ConnorClause

I look forward to the ending :)

Manganime30

Hello. 
          
          You are probably discusted right now because of my chapter that you read. 
          I'm very sorry about that. I had a contest a while ago to ask what my readers wanted and that's it. I told them no but they still wanted to go for it. I wasn't comfortable with it so that's all I did. 
          I shall change the chapter very soon and everything that is inappropriate shall be gone. 
          
          Plus I would like To tell you that there are entire book series that have more detail than what I had put in that one chapter. You may as well go find them and report them as well. For you to read that one chapter and report my story, For that one little section is not very fair the way I take it. Just my thoughts. 
          
          Please have a nice day and try to stay out of trouble. 
          
          From MA

Mr_ConnorClause

January 17,1837    
          
               I looked at the Renaissance again. My eyes still couldn't adjust to the size of the massive ship. I've been waiting in line for hours when all of a sudden "Hey John!" 
          
               "It's Jack." I growled as I turned around to see who would be as rude to have mistaken me. I made the mistake of not thinking I later realized, for the next thing I saw was a fist flying toward my face. "Uhh...". I moaned as I fell toward the ground, face first. At that moment the line shuffled ahead, leaving me in it's dust.
          
               "Jack...Jack....Jack wake up"  Somone was shacking me awake.  I moaned. "Jack, It's Elizabeth."
          
               "Elizabeth?"  I questioned.  I don't remmember knowing any Elizabeth's.
          
              "Yes, Elizabeth Shire, we were gong to share a bunk together on the Renaincance."
          
               "Oh, hi."  I had acually been looking forward to meeting bunkmate, that is, before I knew it was a girl. 
          
                "Jack, the Renaincance is about to leave.  You need to get up and get on now!"  
          
                "Oh no,  lets go!"  I shouted over the noise of yelling saailors.
          
               We ran as fast as we could to get on the Renaincance but by the time we got there, it was already leaving.  We stopped at the edge of the dock,
          
          
                                       How does it look Erin?
          
                                                            -Connor