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I think I might rewrite my story. I'm older now and A LOT of it is mad corny and it'd be easier to do that than pick through literally everything and change it. Not only that but I feel like I should change my writing style. Right now it's:
Me and Issei walk in and give each other a fist bumb before going to our seats.
Boe: *scatching head* is it just me or is school kinda more ass than usual?
Issei: *nodding* that's what I'm saying.
We both start paying attention as the teacher walks in and starts the class.
But I feel like a lot more people, including me, would rather it be like:
Me and Issei walk in class, making sure to give each other a fist bump before we sat in our seats.
"Is it just me or is school kinda more ass than usual?" I say, scratching my head as Issei nods. "That's what I'm saying..." he responds as the teacher comes in, grabbing our attention before starting the class.
Also, I want to restart so I can string things along better. Right now, there's too many ideas going through my head to just throw characters in because I think they'd be a cool addition like Shisa. He was pretty much a made-on-the-spot character and I want to do better in adding him and future characters to the story. I don't know if anyone still reads these but if you do, the next chapter might not come out and instead the whole story will be refined and I'll continue on with it there. But I'll make sure to let everyone know what I end up doing. Probably by tomorrow if not tonight. Peace guys
