Quick update for everyone reading The Adventures of Dragos D. Lars:
I’ve decided to fully redo DregMouth Island I had originally wrote up to Chapter 9 parts 1-20 and realized I still haven’t gotten to the ending so the Chapter 9 Parts 1–12 will be changed but the concept of what I’m going for in this chapter is lots of character development. The arc is now being expanded into Chapter 9 Parts 1–14 instead only, because we have a lot of catching up.
I feel like the original version didn’t fully reach the level of storytelling, character moments, worldbuilding, and emotional weight I wanted for this part of the South Blue Saga. I’ve learned a lot since writing it, and I want to make the island feel more complete, darker, funnier, and more connected to the overall story moving forward.
The core ideas, characters, and major events will still be there, but a lot of scenes, pacing, fights, dialogue, and character interactions are being improved and expanded.
I appreciate everybody who’s been reading and supporting the story so far. Trust me this version will be much better.