Mrs-Delirious

For those reading my Harry Potter book (T.M.R x f!reader), thoughts so far? Is Tom in character? Let me know!

Mrs-Delirious

@Mrs-Delirious thank you for your feedback! I do hope it gets better after the beginning :(
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Iris_Iertino

@Mrs-Delirious I like the book. I feel like it’s close to his actual character. But I will say that  chapters are hard to understand in the beginning. Because sometimes, i feel like we can be doing something at the end of the previous chapter then doing something completely opposite in the beginning of the next. It’s just so abrupt, it’s the only problem I have. Other than that, the book is really good!
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Mrs-Delirious

For those reading my Harry Potter book (T.M.R x f!reader), thoughts so far? Is Tom in character? Let me know!

Mrs-Delirious

@Mrs-Delirious thank you for your feedback! I do hope it gets better after the beginning :(
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Iris_Iertino

@Mrs-Delirious I like the book. I feel like it’s close to his actual character. But I will say that  chapters are hard to understand in the beginning. Because sometimes, i feel like we can be doing something at the end of the previous chapter then doing something completely opposite in the beginning of the next. It’s just so abrupt, it’s the only problem I have. Other than that, the book is really good!
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