@MrsCyberpunk I was thinking of something for in the next chapter of ‘The Spider in the Metal Web’, there is a part in “Out of His Mind” where Raphael was telling Bumblebee of his family, maybe you can incorporate a bit of Dreamweaver’s family, maybe add a song she would sing like either from her carrier/clutch or to her sister, and I would like to suggest or/ recommend a song from a movie ‘Back to the Outback’ called “Maddie’s Lullaby” it’s really lovely and tender to listen(there is a short & a full version of the song you can do either or it’s just a suggestion), but it’s all up to you this is all just a suggestion towards this amazing and wonderful book that you have here. I wish you the best of luck in you giving it your all and to be doing your best at what you do. :) ;)