@JDFanFF It's a wise decision to edit the first chapters because you're right they are short but not too much. Congratulations by the way because this was your first and don't look at your work that low because your work is immensely appreciated by you readers like me. :-)
@marthanicole13 Thank you! I'm planning to edit the first chapters, they're too short and it was the first time that I was writing. I appreciate when people give it a try and continue reading, if it was me, I would have stopped reading after the third chapter :(
@JDFanFF of course I would let you know and so far you're story is interesting and at the same time your story line is hard to predict unlike others that from the title you already know the whole plot.