MrsPark_28

Chapter 23 of Fury is up!!!!

AliVyn

Hey :)
          I just saw that you are searching for a honest critic for your book :))
          I will read it in a moment and give you my opinion :)
          Maybe you can chech out my book as well and give me some feedback in return aswell?
          Have a nice day :))

MrsPark_28

@AliVyn I love your story so far and am looking forward to more chapters. Ten is a very interesting character and I cant wait to see how his relationship with Naeun progresses. His situation at home is so terrible, hopefully Naeun can help put a little brightness in his life.
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AliVyn

OMG that´s great! Thank you so much, I´m still reading as you might have noticed :D
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MrsPark_28

@AliVyn Thank you so much! I read all of your comments and I'm glad you're enjoying the story. It's the first one I've ever written so I really appreciate the feedback. I'm going to spend some time finding pictures that I can add to really engage my readers so thank you for the suggestion. I'm going to check out your story now :D
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