Hello, @Anon_Neemus ! Whew, thank you for your kind words and thank you for appreciating my short stories. Hehe. Actually, nahihirapan pa din ako magpa-iksi ng kuwento lalo at wordy ako. Don't worry! You'll be able to write this type to, iiksi 'yan ng iiksi :) Have you read Eros Atalia's "Wag Lang Di Makaraos"? Hindi ako nag-aadvertise pero marami kang matututuhan kung paano mag-compress ng thoughts in short sentences.
Hope to keep in touch with you!