Northwest Chang'an

Hi! I'm Drianna, I recently started writing my first on-going story entitled Love In War. I'd like to hear some suggestions from other writers and readers. If you have vacant time, would you mind reading it? 
          
          
          Story LINK: https://www.wattpad.com/story/380739302?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Drianna_Azure