I’m enjoying what you have written so far. Your character development is really well written. You have done a great job with some of the original characters and with some of your ocs, I am loving how their personalities are blossoming.
Lately, I’ve been finding myself very picky about what I’m reading. You have hit all the right buttons. Good grammar, well developed descriptions of the scenes so I can actually picture what is going on, good character development, and good dialogue. I am making myself sound like an English teacher aren’t I? Just an avid reader. I’m loving it. Please keep doing what you’re doing. It’s great to read.