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Sorry for plugging author...Good day everyone..Could anyone read my story and pa critique din I want to enhance my skills po and gusto ko pong malaman kung may dapat po bang ayusin or wala po.. 
          
          My first ever story po tapos first chapter palang po gusto ko po ng feedback bago ko po I published Ang next chapters po
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1489269383?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=KyOdAiNa12

DearLoven

Hi dear!  Philippians 4:13
          
          Hopefully you have time to read and support my story entitled "Read and You'll Die". Pls  Your comment will be well appreciated as it can improve my lackings in terms of writing. Thank you so much! 
          
          New chapter is already uploaded. ❤️ #Chapter8
          
          Read it from prologue to the new update chapter  Thank you!
          
          "Read and You'll Die" - a heart-stopping, page-turning thriller that will leave you breathless. Dare to read? 
          
          This is the link:
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/272515538?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=DearLoven&wp_originator=Y6IyP8im%2BB2U57yZHhLSk1IwG9CBNc%2BQ2ScKH8ELuU%2BRDyYDwjkeosH49F8B33kZspLjm%2FNS3OrP1iAjVz7K2BzaFlp3adZ3y7R10q3xipTFXW%2FgfiwlQZ9sBMSyOKW3