I have reworked Jayrock's initial chapters and divided them into three. I felt the original version of his debut chapter may have been too long, especially for the first chapter of the novel, and too many things may have been going on in it.
His new debut chapter is now short and sweet, omitting most of the details but still retaining enough to efficiently kick off his story - and the novel.
His second chapter is now with Gylith on the spacecraft and basically details what happened at the amusement park.
And his third chapter now focuses on the trouble on the spacecraft and how he and Gylith get out of it.
P.S. Meanwhile, work is still going ongoing on Chapter XXXV - Stalemate. I am sorry, I have been extremely busy with residency, but I am still working on it.
