JolyneCujoh1
hey,thanks for the comment,this is my 1st story so i'll try my best ,im russian so there's many words i can write wrong,dont mind,and thank you sooo much ❤️
btw i wanted to ask ,can you write a little bit more about what i need to fix ,thanks again❤️
Multi-fandom_h03
@ JolyneCujoh1 sure! but like I said your problem is your write style I think you should leave a line a little bit and then try to think about that when you writing the reader can read or not that's it