Hi there! I just wanted to let you know that I really enjoy your story the plot, the characters, and the world you’ve built are so interesting and have kept me hooked. I can tell you put a lot of heart and imagination into it, and that’s what matters most.
That said, I hope you won’t mind me saying gently: there are quite a few grammatical errors, spelling mistakes, and sentence structure issues throughout. It gets a little difficult to follow at times, and honestly, as much as I want to keep reading, it can feel a bit straining on the eyes and brain because of how often it pulls me out of the flow.
I only mention this because I truly believe this story has so much potential if it was polished up a little, it would be even more amazing and reach even more readers. Thank you for sharing your work, and I’ll still be here supporting you!
