I want to help people out. If you're like me and want to have the career of being an author, here's one thing I suggest. When writing your book, don't say words like Then, Suddenly, Next, And etc. all the time. Write your book as if the reader were to be the actual character. You may think you're doing this, but most of the time you're not. A good way to fix this is by waiting at least two weeks after writing a section of your book and then coming back to edit it. Read it ALOUD so you can hear the actual dialogue. It's a good tip. Even I have to work on this.