linsella

@Music_Lover2604, thank you for all the wonderful votes on The Forbidden Lands!!!

Music_Lover2604

@linsella Oh great to hear that, I'm awaiting for your next book! Good luck for the next book!
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linsella

I agree. I feel like it is a little rushed because I was trying to write it in a month. I hope, because I'll have more time, the next one will be better. Thanks.
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Music_Lover2604

@linsella Hm, I have to admit that I am not really good in criticising flaws or finding flaws. Though I will give a little of my opinion hoping it could help you out. For me, the storyline seems to be going a little too fast. During those time Evelin adventured in The Forbidden Island, I wish you could've describe and wrote more about her days living with those creatures. Well, that's all I could give of my opinion,  I'm sorry if it isn't any help, but hope to help you out anyways. ☺
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SarahBensonBooks

Hey there @Music_Lover2604! I hope you enjoy the stories in Meet the Wattpad Class of 2014. They are some of my favorite people in the world. I was just checking out your bio and I so relate! Love the Percy Jackson books. Narnia would be amazing. Hoping you're having a fun time on Wattpad!

Music_Lover2604

@SarahBensonBooks Hey! I'm shock an author like you would've check my bio or even start a conversation. Sorry for the late reply though because I hardly check my notification since I often go on Wattpad for, well, obviously reading. Anyways, I am pretty happy that you are able to relate about liking Percy Jackson and Narnia. I will be checking the book Meet the Wattpad Class of 2014. I am sure I will enjoy it.
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