@MusicalsQueen
right... sooooo. me and @AMusicalTheatreKid got logged out of our accounts during our vacation and we've only just realised that we've been really inactive. imma try and work on a new chapter but i'll most likely work on a bunch at once so i can finally keep you guys up to date lol. we're so sorry lmao
so... lol this is weird. i take ages to write so please bear with me as i re-write everything (again lmaoooo) cause i don't like the way i'm writing at the moment XD
Hi everyone, I'm thinking of going back to the way I used to write. I'm not going to change the chapters I already have up, because I actually can't be bothered XD. So the songs will be written as I write them now, but I will go back to writing it like a proper story. Sorry if this causes any inconvenience, I noticed I got a lot more reads when I wrote like that. xx
That's awesome. Good on you ;))
Hi guys, sorry if my chapters haven't been doing to well lately, I promise I will try to update more, I'm having writers block, preparing for a ballet show, singing and piano exams, boy trouble, everything is just like AHHHHH! Any criticism is welcome! Also, I am writing a song for Elizabeth and another male character, any guesses? Things are just hard you know? I just kinda want to die. But nevermind that, I want to keep you guys happy! Love all of you :)
Hi. I just read the new chapter on A Jellicle Returns and, well...I'm being totally honest, I'm not trying to be mean, but..I actually prefer the first one. I just feel the new version is moving a bit too fast, you know? Like everything is happening all at once. But still, you are a good writer. You tell good stories.
@Islajeffery11 Thanks so much for the help, I am re-writing more of it now and I used to ship Victoria X Plato, it's just after seeing the new movie I was like, ok Mistoria is a thing now. :) I'm not the best of writers (obviously) but I will try to take as much advice as I can!
@MusicalsQueen well, for a start you could slow it down a bit. The first went real slow and helped the readers understand what's going on. But honestly, that's the only criticism I can give you. Everything else is great....almost. as you said, you like the movie version, which is fine, but the choice of making the characters into the ones in the new movie is a bit strange. And changing the parents of all the new kittens, I thought was too predictable. I'm actually only saying that cause I ship VictoriaxPlato :))
@Islajeffery11 I totally understand! One day I hope this becomes a real thing, so I'm just trying to write it like a movie would have been. I don't mind any sort of criticism and always look for ways to make my readers happy! Do you have any ideas on how I can fix the chapter? I'm having a bit of writers block
Got a Cats fanfic you might like.
@GreyTabby14 Yeah, now I live in England and my Flemish isn't that good, I guess also because it's both French and German
Aww thanks
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