MusiqueSpecter

@OkiBum I'm two hours behind you (: Thank you, and you sleep well, too!

OkiBum

Good to know! :) Enjoy the rest of your night.
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MusiqueSpecter

@OkiBum You literally made me laugh at that (: Yeah, I understand. I will be sure to! Those errors rarely occur, and I thank you for that. I am a grammar Nazi as well. I just cannot stand grammars! It does stink sometimes to be a grammar Nazi, though, when you make a mistake. The irony is unbearable. However, you seem to have very good grammar, which I am appreciative about (:

OkiBum

:) The irony literally is unbearable. haha. I do get mixed up from time to time with commas though. And words like pass and past. Don't even get me started on content and contempt. Haha.
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MusiqueSpecter

@OkiBum Yes, I did, and thank you again. I'll definitely provide some criticism some time, but so far, the story is great. There's a couple grammar errors where people talk, but it's small like where the commas are placed. I'll demonstrate a few common ways to write someone speaking.
          
          "Hello," he said, smiling. "How are you?"
          
          Here the comma is placed after the word, and the quotation mark is after the comma.
          
          She sighed. "I have been better." She added politely, "And you?"
          
          Here she begins with an action, thus you end it with a period. These are examples, mind you. Then it is followed by her adding something more, which includes a comma before the quotation mark. 
          
          These are some of the ways, but I'm simply being picky, because this is truly amazing. I hope I helped a little, and I look forward to reading more in the future (:

OkiBum

Thank you! Haha. I honestly type way too fast sometimes and my eyes don't catch these things so if it gets to a point where its unbearable or its just more than usual, let me know. I'll go back and fix it because I am a Nazi when it comes to these things - if I catch it. haha. I can't even read things like:
            
            "U kno da ding over ther?" 
            DRIVES ME INSANE. haha. So thank you for the tip. :)
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MusiqueSpecter

@OkiBum Awww (: Yeah, it is Kat, and might I just say that you have an excellent talent for writing? I love your story so much, and I just started reading it today. I look forward to your updates, and you deserve more recognition for your amazing ability to write such a creative story. I will definitely stick with this book - it is one of the best I've read. Keep doing what you're doing. You are truly talented (:

OkiBum

Thank you SO much. I don't know if you've seen the chapter I just posted but its dedicated to you for this message. I REALLY appreciate it! As I said. haha. And thank you for the follow too :) If there's any ideas or suggestion for the story that you might have to make it a little more exciting or clearer, let me know anytime. I love criticism. haha.
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OkiBum

Hi Kat (or so I'm guessing is your name/nickname from Katlovestoread) :) No brainer at all unless its not. Then I'm just rambling nonsense here. Anyway - just wanted to say thank you for liking my story Chasing Tails. I hope you enjoy it! I'll try to finish posting it ASAP for you. :):):)