MwWill

Hello once again PDoD fans!
          	Sorry I've been dead for quite some time here, summer chores is crazy!
          	Anyways, with advice with my cousin, I altered chapter 1 involving Michael's mom, even her dialogue on Ecruteak Pokemon Center. Hope you bare with me and reread the first chapter again, had to fill in plotholes.
          	 MwWill out.

starmario552

@MwWill hey are you still around?
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MwWill

Hello once again PDoD fans!
          Sorry I've been dead for quite some time here, summer chores is crazy!
          Anyways, with advice with my cousin, I altered chapter 1 involving Michael's mom, even her dialogue on Ecruteak Pokemon Center. Hope you bare with me and reread the first chapter again, had to fill in plotholes.
           MwWill out.

starmario552

@MwWill hey are you still around?
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MwWill

Sorry for all the wild changes to the last chapter. I delve deeper into the lore of Ecruteak Gym and learned of its architecture.  I wanna do this right and stay as true as possible to the canon Gym. Hope you aall take the time to reread my chapter to relieve some confusion.

MwWill

For those who read my story so far, I decided to change something up in chapter 18. My cousin told me a dangerous flaw about my logic so I painstakingly agreed to change so.  Rereading it will be much appreciated. Sorry for the changes.

MwWill

So all I did was alter one of the characters Legend a bit, for those who read it already, pretend you don't know anything yet. I also changed the dad's outfit a little but that is it. You didn't miss much, just making things a little more mysterious is all.

MwWill

Sorry for spoiling all those who read my story so far, but I decided I wanted Legend to be a bit more on the mystery side. I decided to change up Tommy's Past Adventures to make Legend more mysterious for the sake of the story.

MwWill

I smirked as I readied myself with Pikachu in my arms, "Pikachu, use Thunder." I tossed him over my head with all my might as he echoed the first two cylables of his name, but Jessie said something unusual.
          "Arbok, Seismic Toss!" The cobra Pokemon replied hissing his name as he majestically sprung after Pikachu and successfully tossed him into the water behind the thieves.
          "Pikachu!" Ash shouted. I was in complete shock as I never expected such an amazing counter.
          Pikachu, being annoyed and floating mumbled the two cylables of his name once again, I put two and two together and started running before he echoed the last part of his name, the water lit up in a giant golden glow along with a nuclear level lightning bubble.
          I ran throughout the harbor screaming, "TAKE COVER PEOPLE!" 
          I found myself a few feet somehow with the bubble behind me, somehow parkor myself up high into a building window until everything went quiet.
          Laughing from excitement, I quickly but carefully climbed down and rejoined the group, Team Rocket was nowhere to be seen, their sub was destroyed scrap metal and Ash and friends was dirty from electric sulfur with frizzy hair, laughing.
          I laughed as I said, I escaped Pikachu's attack guys, it was so epic.
          "That was so cool Will!" Misty happily got in my face hugging Togepi. 
          "Yeah, how did you do all that?" Brock said where he stood.
          I awkwardly scratched my head, "Call it a hunch I guess?"
          Ash walked up to me with Pikachu on his shoulder reaching his hand out to shake mine, "You'll make a fine Pokemon Trainer."
          I hesitated with shock before reaching out to accept his, "Thanks! This was quite the experience.
          Then more laugher from the group and Pokemon before I woke up. The end. 
          
          Part 2 of 2

MwWill

Have you ever had an intense realistic Pokemon dream?
          Mine started off with Ash and friends, seemed a bit like young cosplayers with real Pokemon, basically it was rather short but hilarious. 
          We were hanging out on the docks, Brock, Misty, Ash and I.
          Everything was fine until Team Rocket arose from underwater in their giant Gyarados sub. It struck me with awe on its shiny blue chasi.
          Just like out of the anime, they said their quote, but more awkwardly due to music not existing, we nearly cringed with boredom.
          After that, Ash and friends in sync yelled out, "Team Rocket!"
          The trio laughing, performed at once a big majestic front flip onto the docks. At this point I awe'd them of their acrobatic talent.
          "We're here to steal Pikachu!" Said Jessie.
          "Yeah, and what else is new?" Ash replied. I laughed as Team Rocket dramatically flopped to the ground before springing to their feet like Bruce Lee
          "So that's what it looks like in IRL." I mumbled to myself.
          Soon enough, Meowth, with a creepy sharp toothed grin, pressed a big red button on this remote, the Gyarados sub suddenly opened hidden hatches from its sides with big mechanical arms. I knew Pikachu was gonna be snatched.
          I reacted before the machine did and somehow dived for Pikachu with a perfect roll dodge out of its grasp.
          "Hey you twerp! Stop getting in our way of stealing Pikachu!" Jessie yelled at me.
          "Can't you three just quit and find a real job you jerks?" I snarkily replied. That seemed to trigger them cause they suddenly summoned their Pokemon Arbok and Weezing, they looked so creepy IRL.
          "Ash, can I borrow Pikachu?" I shouted.
          "Go for it Will!" He replied.
          
          Part 1 of 2

MwWill

So I been thinking for quite some time that I might unpublish ToonWorld for uninterested reasons. If anyone wants it back, I'll see to bring it back... But I need confirmation, are you interested in ToonWorld?