i apologize on behalf of the hp fandom for the behavior of the two people under me. it was extremely immature & unkind of them to say those rude things to you. criticism should be given lightly, not as rude as they put it. please, don’t take their harsh words to heart! you’re young, you have so much more time to achieve better writing. writing takes so much practice to be good at. please do not take writing advice from someone who doesn’t even have published work or followers—for that matter. keep on writing!!! you’re going to become great at this!!!! have a good day <3!!!
