Hi. Here is my comment regarding your stories. Please don't find this an encouraging. My comments were both in good and not good:
1. I find your plot interesting. I hope it will reached the peak the same peak it reached the first chapters.
2. Though the plot is cute and unique, please just don't put to much emoticons or better don't put emoticons, I feel like reading a jejemon novel.
3. Spelling, as much as possible make your spelling right don't do shortcuts, text style messages and jejemon style.
4. Justify why the leading woman always smiles. Mahirap namang isipin na may saltik siya sa utak.
5. As what I say ang cute ng plot. Ipagpatuloy mo yung novel. you already catches my attention.
i will wait for the next update.
K!Bye