@MyaMartinMEME, I like the story but there several typos that take away from the flow of the story making it difficult to read at times, as I to go back and correct some of the spelling, as either the wrong word was used or the verb tense is not correct. Is anyone helping you to proofread your chapters before you publish them? I would be happy to assist you if you like, or I can read you the method I use to proofread a chapter before I publish it. Don't hesitate to get in touch with me here or through my email at caseyt8@yahoo.com
