Myanimegirl72

@Myanimegirl72 I meant I'm sorry I deleted the story

Snowfall1379

Hi, I'm reading your book 'the life of siena grey' and I love it! Just a tip, watch your punctuation. Without capitals, commas, some full stops, and apostrophes, it is very confusing to read a book. Many writers don't care about these things, but sometimes something like this can lower the amount of readers you get. They find it hard to understand the sentences, they don't understand the story, they stop reading. If you aren't good at self editing, you could get someone else to edit for you.
          
          I hope that you do update soon though, because I am looking forward to the next chapter!