heyy aznwriterabby, you should check out the story i'm working on sometime named CALL PAUL FIFE IN CITY LIGHTS, cause i could use as much advice on it as i can get, and as far as the one he once loved you should so go towards the victorian era and think about some kinda love triangle, or it is from the lover's point of view, maybe make the lovie a hard to get person with lots of competition cause that always makes room for drama. Good luck with the story cause it sounds pretty interesting, and let me know what comes of it.