Givemedeeships
This is not in any offense to your writing abilities but rather in the direction you chose to write in in the 4th chapter. R*ape is not a joke. The fact that you write about a potential romantic partner r*aping the person they supposedly “care for” is disgusting. I am referring to Jade being r*aped by Dylan (chapter 4). I understand that people have a right to write about inappropriate scenes on Wattpad but you have to understand that you glorify R*APE in your book and a lot of kids read inappropriate books like yours on Wattpad. It is damaging when a young impressionable person reads stories that glorify and exploit r*ape. R*ape is not a joke. You aren’t quirky because you wrote r*ape into your book. It is disgusting. I am not sure if you will even read this but if you do I hope you go back in and edit your book even if it is old because people (young and old) can come on Wattpad and still read your story. This kind of thing can be damaging and triggering. This is me pointing out something sick and upsetting about your book. Again I am not saying anything about the WAY you write I am saying there is an issue with what is being WRITTEN.
