Mykel Danielle Gordon

Ive tried reaching out to a few but Im not even sure how to go about it. I would really be thankful if you could give me some advise. I just began chapter three today and published it but I'm not finished with it yet. I'm not even sure when I should start a new paragraph during my writing or even how to break it up into pages I know where my story is going but I have trouble making my characters transition into speaking I don't want to start every line with  (he said she said) also my grammer and spelling need help I've re written all three chapters every day since I began and they are now a little better but in all I feel its a mess. Wood you please read them and give me some advise. Just whenever u get the chance. Thanks again for your time and I hope I'm not interrupting you from writing my favorite story because im waiting for the next upload. Lol no pressure :) 

Not published yet--not any longer works, at any rate. Never had time until now to devote to a novel.  Thanks for the compliment.  How is your story coming.  You know you only have to reach out to almost anyone here to get help, should you need it.  But, I would be happy to help any way I can, also.  Alora

Of course I should have done it along time ago but I'm always so busy I love the story and can't wait your one of my favorite authors on here I've been reading on this site for months and I love your style. Are you a published author like can I buy your books? If so where? And if not you should be.@alorasilverleaf 

Thanks for becoming my fan, and for voting on A Bride for the Asking.  Alora