Struggler_San

Read the post that was good 
          Music cues were good 
          Nobanaga sub plot got me curious 
          Well structured 
          I like how tanjiro was saving guts and guts is teaching them the cruelty of the world 
          
          If I wrote this I’ll split this to several characters, hashiras have each there own chapter with guts and deepening some of there relationships, would have improved guts arsenal with winstreha. Somewhat unsure when this took place. Over all I throughly enjoyed this

MynameisJeff778

Glad you enjoyed and it takes place not in the Taisho period like in the anime but take place in feudal Japan in the sengoku period where that period is known for to have many states of different clans of armies in Japan fighting to takeover Japan a setting time period fitting and familiar for a brute like Guts.
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Struggler_San

As you said I’m busy with the other stories,however I’ll keep in mind of it story wise the start will be original story then dives to the main plot, want to say when the trio finally meet. Be similar to my RWBY: Berserk story

MynameisJeff778

Here it is again: https://docs.google.com/document/u/0/d/1C2_dA71CxZSpvGttGugY1intncTiHL_czkSL1QuMvvk/mobilebasic
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MynameisJeff778

Okay but I will try to open it up for you see you can see it link
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Struggler_San

Sorry but I couldn’t open the link
          
          https://x.com/yyi_ass/status/1492311325137154051?s=42
          
          The idea did came to me a while ago. Synopsis, a young boy from England name Guts venture to the land of the rising sun, to seek revenge one the on who betrayed him Griffith. Who somehow gained supernatural powers and went to slaughter and eat his comrades. But leaving him alive and cursed to draw all matter of demon.
          
          His trail of finding Griffith led him to Japan where guts has to deal with not only demons but the Demon Slayer Corps who wage war against them, leading him to bump heads with them, especially with a boy with earrings that sympathize with demons