@FinnyH
Hello! Thanks for all of the detailed feedback - it was so much fun to read.
I'd say Nightmare is my current favourite. I was hesitant to post that one, along with some of the other surreal ones, because I'm not sure they entirely make sense/can be tied down to any sort of concrete meaning. But I definitely have the most fun writing those because they feel so alien.
(So yes, hopefully lots more surreal poetry to come!)
Tough question! I also write fiction, so I think that if I thought of an idea for a story instead of a poem, I'd probably just write it that way from the outset. But I'd probably choose Amateur Cartographers, because I enjoy stories about people moving to new places and exploring them.
Thanks for all the encouragement!