MysliaUndaunted2

What would it be like to be a raindrop? It would be quite a lonely existence I would imagine. Sure you would be able to fly, but you would constantly be snatched away from other raindrop communities in the oceans, the lakes or even a plant's leaves. Then you find a new community in the sky, but eventually you feel so heavy that you can do nothing but drop into an endless river, washed back to sea. The other raindrops greet you, but then weariness becomes your existence as you realize you must start the entire cycle again.

MysliaUndaunted2

This was inspired by A Series of Unfortunate Events by Lemony Snicket. What are your thoughts on my raindrop life?
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MysliaUndaunted2

What would it be like to be a raindrop? It would be quite a lonely existence I would imagine. Sure you would be able to fly, but you would constantly be snatched away from other raindrop communities in the oceans, the lakes or even a plant's leaves. Then you find a new community in the sky, but eventually you feel so heavy that you can do nothing but drop into an endless river, washed back to sea. The other raindrops greet you, but then weariness becomes your existence as you realize you must start the entire cycle again.

MysliaUndaunted2

This was inspired by A Series of Unfortunate Events by Lemony Snicket. What are your thoughts on my raindrop life?
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GaugeSullens

Hi there! My name is Gauge and I was wondering if you would read my book, The Wingfeather Saga ~ The End. I noticed you like The Wingfeather Saga, so your votes and comments would be greatly appreciated! Thanks!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/403988965-the-wingfeather-saga-%7E-the-end

MysliaUndaunted2

@GaugeSullens Oh, by the way, do you want me to add constructive criticism? And if so, would you like me to add it on grammar or on your storyline?
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MysliaUndaunted2

@GaugeSullens Sure! Sorry I haven't gotten back to you sooner, I had kind of forgotten about Wattpad...but I have plenty of time now!
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LadyElmerya

heyyy just wanted to say thank you so much for checking out my ra fanfic!! really loved seeing your comments♡

MysliaUndaunted2

@LadyElmerya ☺️☺️☺️ thx for your message! I love commenting as well! It takes forever, especially since I'm a slow typer, but reading previous comments and seeing replies just makes me feel like a warm fuzzy ball inside.  Plus, I really enjoyed your fanfic!
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