Mysteriouxombre
As I write the seventh chapter of By The Force, I’ve come to realize the story isn’t unfolding as I planned. The connection between Lesmerie and the audience is lacking, and I have revealed almost nothing about her character at all. I’ve decided to rewrite chapters five and six—to further emphasize the later unfolding events in chapter seven. It might take a week or two to be finished, as I have Exams this week. I apologize