Mysteriouxombre

As I write the seventh chapter of By The Force, I’ve come to realize the story isn’t unfolding as I planned. The connection between Lesmerie and the audience is lacking, and I have revealed almost nothing about her character at all. I’ve decided to rewrite chapters five and six—to further emphasize the later unfolding events in chapter seven. It might take a week or two to be finished, as I have Exams this week. I apologize

Mysteriouxombre

As I write the seventh chapter of By The Force, I’ve come to realize the story isn’t unfolding as I planned. The connection between Lesmerie and the audience is lacking, and I have revealed almost nothing about her character at all. I’ve decided to rewrite chapters five and six—to further emphasize the later unfolding events in chapter seven. It might take a week or two to be finished, as I have Exams this week. I apologize

Mysteriouxombre

The seventh chapter of "Born To Die" (Which would be considered the sixth published chapter) is in the works! With the relationship between Newt and Rosalind laid out, I'm getting more comfortable with writing the beginning of their relationship in the missing chapter. I'm extremely excited!

Mysteriouxombre

As much as I love writing in first person, it is relatively hard for me as I am not a well-seasoned writer. I find that when writing in third person, I have more freedom and can warp the reality with much intense emotions. I decided to rewrite "By The Force" in third person. I will work on the fourth chapter and release it but will immediately begin rewriting the chapter before.