ARGUS_FALLEN_019

Hey man, your NTR revenge or Yandere revenge fanfiction are quite interesting. But here's the tips: try to avoid copying a new created plot with the help of an AI. Some of your story has a last suggestion like you know, "Here is the revised version… etc. Etc.", which I highly suspected that you used chat gpt or other AI app to create your story. You can only use it for future references, re-write from the ai and make it more realistic or follow the plot that fits the background if possible, or review on the anime or manga of what the plots will be before creating a story/chapter and posting it publicly. 
          
          I'm not here to criticize your work, but trying to help you improve yourself on writing a good story. That's it, and enjoy your time with your stories. PEACE✌️

Dp_is-Op

Writer's block?

Dp_is-Op

@MysticOtaku22 I know nothing about danmachi lol.Maybe I'll look into it 
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MysticOtaku22

@Dp_is-Op One I posted a new chapter but I've been writing a Danmachi story for a character I made in the Ganesha Familia who becomes the Dark Age's Hero and turns the tides against them and he basically becomes the most effective adventurer to fight against the Evilus 
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lordofANTINTR

Hey I'm FINALY back log. Time no see I FINALY CNA read your book in peace and no work or probeom.vur I still have fhinhs the first book and my god ..bro..miss or Mr..pls MKAE LIST FROM FIRST BOOK TO LATEST ONE LIKE IM DEAD ASS GONE ACT LIKE YOUTUBER TIME LINE REVIEWER EHO REWIWRRMOVE AND SERIES AND ANIMES MANAG AND TIME LINE..AND MAKE IT FROM WHAT BOOK START READING  pls help me out here or give me list of name from cnon or order of book I have to read thank you very much

lordofANTINTR

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@lordofANTINTR thx alot...cus I been LOSSING my shit you making. Alot  anti ntr story and hi sorry I'm late..ilbene  busy for mouthn now resting back info thdi app...and bruh..Ineed that list badly cus I'm so lost..I'm reading form.begining and Ineed to know where to go next from point a to b and hey hope you doing. Alright if have  discorde or anything let me know so ichat with you..if need some.one to talk or vborde or just emothinal or debate or just talk..let me know firend
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MysticOtaku22

@lordofANTINTR Ok give me a bit to make a list 
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lordofANTINTR

I THE EMPRORE of anti ntr APRROVE OF YOUR SOTRY AND LOVE THEM SO KEEP YOUR HEAD UP MATE BUT my brother in Christ I'm still in ntr slayer 1 endingto read others you already MAKING NTR DALYER 4 GOD DAMM..(IM PERSIAN FROM.IRAN MALE GAE 25 and about retriwiiting stuff I wish you would do it as alternative or like make boo call it remake or remaster but in general I'm okey with how you written the orginal.meven tho ic ould be better it still good and I love lemon so keep adding lemon or sex lol..iknow in pervert but beside all that..make portigsint more assertive or domint or more calm or even SOEM of them cold emothinlesss or mortalt wounded perosnaly becoming part of ntr slayer like some of them just while move on theere PEROSNALYY change dheavy and we can there interaction with ppl and parents that shows that they still hreat or just broken inside or when found new loved one. They try to undrestand why they do cold and hard towrds them)