Mythical04

@Wolfdemon04 I knew I was missing something

@Wolfdemon04  ok thank you for your opinion

@Wolfdemon04 It's really good, but I would suggest putting in some paragraphs and getting Grammarly, sometimes people make mistakes and don't notice it until someone points it out or until you find it later on. Plus, you should make a rough draft of it and have a second opinion.