Mythomagic3

Hi. I’m an aspiring author, so I will draft my stories for people to read and give advice/recommendations about my writing. I want you to be brutal. Point out every grammar or spelling mistake, or anything unrealistic. Thx!

Mythomagic3

Hi. I’m an aspiring author, so I will draft my stories for people to read and give advice/recommendations about my writing. I want you to be brutal. Point out every grammar or spelling mistake, or anything unrealistic. Thx!