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I wanna make this clear, are my plots hard to follow? Or am I not filling out any plot holes? Or my explanations aren't well? I want to minimize confusion. While also keeping in mind that BAWWRAO is a mystery, I'd like to know any questions you have by replying to this thread. But I may warn, some questions I may be answered within the story ;)

Hello, dear readers,
          
          I'd like to thank you for your feedback and to say that unfortunately, I'm not able to reply to your comments individually, for I'm on an android device. But I'll still be reading your comments and listening to your feedback. If you want, feel free to contact me through dm.
          
          Thank you!

I'll redo Black and White with Red all Over with how I wanted it to be, (because I may have strayed from the goal a bit). But I guess, this is falling on deaf ears, so I'll just get on with it...

I've decided to publish once I finish a chapter (which is about every two days) than to serialize. So, 10 chapters are out now, and overall, it has about 3 chaters left. Add Black and White with Red all Over to your reading list to receive new chapter updates. Thanks!

Hey, I've released a story called Black and White with Red All Over and I want you all to know that I'll accept and consider your thoughts and feedback. I hope to deliver a story my readers will enjoy. 
          
          See ya ~ B. D. Noire