N3ko08

(TT~TT) I wanted to go to the Santa Cruz Boardwalk... But its so far from LA that I decided to just go with the Santa Monica pier instead. Hopefully it will be fun... Who am I kidding of course it will be fun seeing the ocean for the first time ever! ☺

AlyssaDeeRhodes

I’m sorry this is really late reply, but I just wanted to thank you for commenting on my story! I appreciate it more than you know! I’m coming back from a writers block and will be updating it more frequently! 

N3ko08

@AlyssaDeeRhodes its awesome that you replied. I really do enjoy your story because who doesn't love reading about Paul  plus I like your story telling style~ 
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Mentally-Insane

Thank you for voting on my story Escaping the Monsters Embrace :)

Mentally-Insane

Yup I can tell you that Emmett will be seen a lot more further along in the story :) thank you so much I reallllllly needed to rewrite it haha I was only 13- 14 when I started to write the first version so my writing sucked haha. I'll be updating sooon so keep an eye out ;p
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N3ko08

@Mentally-Insane i really like your rewritten version, the one with the girl slightly turned towards the viewer. I read your old version after the new one and i can honestly say i enjoyed the new version. The characters are more filled out and i love their development ^^;; honestly Emmett sounded like a creeper in the old version. I can't wait to see how the story develops further ^^~<3
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N3ko08

(TT~TT) I wanted to go to the Santa Cruz Boardwalk... But its so far from LA that I decided to just go with the Santa Monica pier instead. Hopefully it will be fun... Who am I kidding of course it will be fun seeing the ocean for the first time ever! ☺