N3onKn1ght

Promening part 1 is out, enjoy it. I'm going to sleep now, good night

Helljumper1337

@N3onKn1ght,
          The reason why I have the Automatons from Helldivers is that they are essentially advanced models of disassembly drones, with vast improvements such as better cooling systems and better weapons.

Helljumper1337

Also I might remove all the subordinates except maybe two, and I would like to thank you for inspiring me to write my MD story. :)
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Helljumper1337

I’m currently working on Chapter 1.5 Origins for my MD story. Also if you want to use my Y/N, please refer to him as X to avoid confusion with the Y/N in Fire and Sword.

Helljumper1337

I understand
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N3onKn1ght

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@Helljumper1337 Well you should've started with that, now here's my answer
            
            1. You may not have said or implied it, but the way you told me to refer to your Y/N differently is as if you're treating me like I wouldn't know already and it would be my first time. UDOL's Y/N from quickdraw made a cameo in my story, so did THE0TEH0's Y/N from M.I.L.K but I didn't refer to them as Y/N
            
            2. I don't do crossovers between my book and other people's book, that shit's still too complex for me to do and I still need to learn about it more before I even think about doing it
            
            And another thing, your Y/N and ESPECIALLY his underlings wouldn't align with my Fire & Sword. Because during WW3 in my story, there were NO models like those, only Military Combat Drones and mechs. This is one of the reasons why I told you it wouldn't be a good idea for your Y/N to have underlings, but you chose to keep them anyway, and you know what? That's fine, but that just reduces the chance of your Y/N EVER being included in Fire & Sword from low to none at all
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Helljumper1337

I wasn’t saying or implying that you were a rookie. Also I know that this is a long shot at best, but I’m asking if you might consider including my Y/N in your story.
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N3onKn1ght

All drones in Fire & Sword has censorship filter that made their voice glitch whenever they attempt to use profanity. They are off by default but can be enabled by others using codes, the code used to disable it is the same one used to enable it but the code must be inserted backwards to disable the filter
          
          Drones with active censorship cannot disable it by themselves,  each drone with active censorship has different activation code so that it can't be disabled by random people
          
          Example :
          Khan's activation code for Uzi's censorship filter is "ILoveDoors!", to disable it he just needs to insert "!srooDevoLI"

Helljumper1337

@N3onKn1ght Interesting
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StormShadow15-05

Cool
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Helljumper1337

I've made some adjustments to the Bio, I hope its better now.

N3onKn1ght

@Helljumper1337 Beside everything else I told you that are kind of optional... I have no idea
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Helljumper1337

Okay, mini-nukes are gone, anything else I should change?
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N3onKn1ght

@Helljumper1337 Eh, it's a bit better but overall the bio's still not that much good to look at when I reach the harem images. Also I suggest getting rid of the mini-nukes, it's not good for a character to have such a powerful weapon since beginning
            
            Now for the next topic, the subordinates... It's up to you whether to keep them or not. But in my opinion, they're terrible. Reasons being : Too many of them, they're just automatons taken from helldivers, you gave them Serial Designation names when those are supposed to be used for disassembly drone/JCJenson drone models, no point on having so many subordinates as if the worker drones are good at fighting back
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