NDNoutlaw
Thank you, guys, for 100 reads. This was my first time doing something like this, and I am very grateful for your support and critiques
NDNoutlaw
NDNoutlaw
Hey guys, sorry that I haven't updated much, just trying to figure things out and how to move the story forward, so one of my issues that I'm struggling with is how to incorporate FISA and Rainbow. If you don't know, FISA is RoN's version of the FBI, the problem is that Rainbow has the FBI operators, so I'm at a crossroads, I could change Ashe, thermite, pulse, and castle as FISA or make FISA a whole separate organization where they sorta do work with the FBI but their unaware of the corruption of FISA, so that's where i'm at. Another part coming soon, until then, make your predictions when Rainbow comes across the container in Port Hokan, and how they react to FISA telling them to close the doors and move on.
Ardhan630
Just some bit of critics. I need to see the loadouts, like guns, equipment, etc for the D-Platoon (you can also included Rainbow loadout if you like). Other then that, great Fanfiction and story! Keep cooking!
Ardhan630
@NDNoutlaw No problem mate. Keep cooking the stories! Also, it would be a very funny panic reaction if Rainbow Operators sees Judge not only being Resilient when it come to situation like this, but also how literally judge being literally tough even under fire before taking cover after returning fire at suspects. Man, judge is just built different.
NDNoutlaw
@Ardhan630 Oh man, I didn't even think about that. I'll be sure to include that in my Port Hokan chapter. Thank you for reading!! This is like my first ever time writing a fanfic, and thank you for taking the time to read !!