hello dear!! how are you? I hope you are fine. I read you story and I want to tell you few things about your story which will definetely help you to gain more reader for sure...
1. cover: I think you should change you cover. Like I am not saying that you cover is not good, it's good but I don't think it will attract more readers so. there are many cover shops in my reading list . you can visit them and get a perfect cover for your story.
2. Name: I think you should remove the emoji from you story's name.
3. Discription: you should put as attractive scene of you story in discription to gain more attention from reader.
4. language: I have already stated it before that your story is in pure hindi, so it is hard for you to get international readers.
so this are some points I want to tell you about your story❤️