NHMusic03AU

Three chapters out for "The Breath Within" so far. Hope you enjoy!

NHMusic03AU

Hey guys, 2nd chapter Under Talon and Scrutiny, for Vengeance & Despair. I aim to write and publish the 3rd chapter Tassled and Scoffed, at the end of August, but that may drag into September depending on my working schedule.
          Hope you enjoy the chapter!

Silverfstreak

Thank you so much for adding “Dragons Rising” to your reading list and voting on it! I’m glad you enjoyed it!

NHMusic03AU

Its a well-paced book, anf keeps to its point without moving around too much. However, I feel like the races in this book weren't brought out clearly enough, since I'm struggling to understand what each one is defined as. I'm mean wizards are obviously wizards, but cinems and talmes are a little outside my imagination. I would really appreciate a chapter around the character descriptions, as well as definitions.
            Overall though, great book.
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NHMusic03AU

Hey guys, and girls.
          Guess what? 
          I'm starting a new book. Entirely different to what I've previously done. I'm doing poetry. This book is inspiration from NivaGaming. If you want, go check that out. But for now, I'm doing my own. I'll do one piece of poetry, and whoever gives the most inspiring meaning will get a dedication at the start of the next chapter.
          Sincerely,
          TRAPNHM2875.

ABruisedHeart

Thank you for the follow and votes! I'm surprised anyone likes my terrible "poetry". Also, I noticed you like The Inheritance Cycle? (Aka Eragon)

ABruisedHeart

@TRAPNHM2875 it's okay and nice! I don't find many Eragon fans on here so it's nice to know there's at least one
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NHMusic03AU

@NivaGaming And yes I do have interest towards the story of dragons and major story plot twists. And sorry for not responding to the latter part of the message beforehand.
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NHMusic03AU

You're Welcome! And yes, I do. Poetry is many things to different people but we all use it to anyway possible. Rhymes or no, it was poetry. Metaphors or no, its poetry. I just like it, for some reason.
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