NIKOCHANXDD

Hey guys i decided to delete my book of my naruto cliche rant book. People keep commenting on my books and its getting to me so im gonna have to delete it. Sorry if anyone liked or loved it but the comments were just too much for me. I made that book when I was 14 years old and I never really went back to edit it. Im older now so I dont have that mindset anymore. Sorry if i have offended anyone with the rape mentioned. It was not my intention to misuse that word. 
          	Hope you guys have a nice day

NIKOCHANXDD

Hey guys i decided to delete my book of my naruto cliche rant book. People keep commenting on my books and its getting to me so im gonna have to delete it. Sorry if anyone liked or loved it but the comments were just too much for me. I made that book when I was 14 years old and I never really went back to edit it. Im older now so I dont have that mindset anymore. Sorry if i have offended anyone with the rape mentioned. It was not my intention to misuse that word. 
          Hope you guys have a nice day

apaixonardo

Hi! I was wondering if you could take a look at my Naruto fanfiction "A Girl's Demons" and possibly give any criticism? By the way, I love your rant book; it really helped a lot!

NIKOCHANXDD

@BrieMonczynski your welcome (:
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apaixonardo

Thank you! That means a lot because I noticed I have a tinge of cliché (The fact that Yuuta's part wolf) and rants are always like "wolves are cliché" and I was worried that it took away from the plot. But besides that, thank you for reading and I hope you enjoyed it! ❤️
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NIKOCHANXDD

@BrieMonczynski so far its pretty good. I think its cool you did a major timeskip and have your oc did her own thing in her own village. Not many people do that but this is story is interesting and pretty good.
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cutiepuff13

Sup its me again and I would REALLY like it if you started a book called "Good Naruto books that you should read" even though thats pretty hard nowadays but ik a few like Akatsuki AU's and stuff that are surprisingly really interesting and of you would like to read my NarutoxOC fic called For Every Short White Strand on my account it would be really nice! And give me a good review on it and see if its fit enough to be added to your book of good Naruto fanfics?

NIKOCHANXDD

@cutiepuff13 it seemed that your oc really likes naruto and is a complete fangirl to him. Just like Sakura to Sasuke. It seemed its going to the comedy side but at the same time I can't help but cannot take this story seriously. All I can say is okay in my book but you should probably make your character more serious as the story progresses because obviously right now she is in the academy so its okay for her to act like that right now. Also your oc kekkai genkai isn't detailed so I am really confused of what it does besides the eyes turning purple. The birds does not make any sense into the clan where they are just simply summoning animals. Not anything special to any clan at all. Your oc's hatred to both Sakura and Hinata wasn't very surprising at all since it is cliche. Other than that it is okay but make  character development as the story progress and do not make your character overpowered. That is something you should definitely avoid.
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NIKOCHANXDD

@cutiepuff13 okay
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cutiepuff13

@cutiepuff13 you can say anything you want about it I honestly dont care i just want to make sure it's GOOD
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NIKOCHANXDD

@Alexa-Luna it's completely fine if your oc is from a powerful clan. Just make sure your oc is not too powerful but if you do want to make your oc strong. Just do it overtime and make the character developed and get stronger over time through the story. The common mistake is that most people would make their oc really powerful in the beginning of the story and that kills it completely