@NMS2010
Hi!
If you enjoy fantasy adventures with action, mysteries, and character growth, you might enjoy my story Unified W.
Follow Kai as he uncovers the secrets of a world where every answer leads to new questions and every victory comes at a price.
I'd really appreciate it if you checked it out on my profile. Thanks for your time!
Hi love ur story
F4f??
I should probably make a book cover so it can be visible.
I'm on wattpad pc android emulator and so when I try to read a page it tilts 90 degrees
Thanks I might post chapter 3 next week also so stay tuned,
And I will keep reading yours too.
A. Nira felt the breeze in the air, a strange feeling of calmness took over fear.
B. Nira felt the breeze in the air, flowing with the scent like a calm river in the soul
About the character name highlights, I've seen this in certain styles and they're also good
I wanted to ask you about certain choices of sentences in chapter 2 in which I put A and B somewhere
To give choices for you to choose which would be better
I'm still reading on your chapters, but I just posted an early release on-
my chapter 2. And I want your opinions on it
This is where the emotion is, just wait a bit 'till the end of chapter 2.
@NMS2010 Are you talking about your read counts? For a moment I thought it was about my chapter 2 XD.
@Ralsei_the_Darkner bro in both of ur chapters there is one thing which u should change and that is highlighting the characters names all the time
Okay so to make it clear, you should check chapter 1 of "Stranded upside down". perhaps the problem may be that it has no book cover?
bro i call it a peak all u need no do is add a bit more emotions and increase
intense but right now it is solid 8.5
@Ralsei_the_Darkner
I have two stories written but I want you to read "Stranded upside down" the more recent one.