NOGenres

Wow!100 views!Never thought I can reached this far.
          	
          	Thanks to all my followers that comment and vote on my books!You guys are the best!

jacobhenderson2121

Hey my friend. I enjoyed the next chapter of your book, but there is one thing I'd like to point out. When you place commas, you don't space the next word in the series. I was wondering if that's the way you learned comma placement or if there's a method to your madness. At any rate, it would make the transition from thought to thought easier to read if you space your words after the commas. Other than that, you're doing excellent. Keep it up. :)

jacobhenderson2121

@NOGenres You are right, I haven't even considered that.
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NOGenres

@jacobhenderson5477 You know that 80% percent of people use phones on Wattpad?And why don't you made parts instead?
            
            My friend,genkO1 books is all long but based on his observation and personal experience,it would be wise to split chapter into parts.
            
            Exmaple-Chapter 23-Part 1
            Chapter 23-Part 2
            
            This probably sounds like a critic but I highly suggested you to line break.Ask any writers,they would recommend it too.But still,its your book so if you don't wanna to do it,then its fine.
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jacobhenderson2121

@NOGenres I don't use line breaks often, its easier for me to keep the dialog and the context together in the paragraphs that way than to break them up. Plus, my chapters are nearly a thousand words or better. It would make the pages like a million miles long
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NadjaPr

Aww thanks for making a separate reading list for my books :3 That's so nice of you!

NadjaPr

Aww thanks! :3
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NOGenres

@PerfectWorld98 No prob!Your books is great and its deserve their own reading list at my profile! :)
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genk01

Thank you for your comment and vote on my "thanksgiving with batman" story. I'm glad you enjoyed it. 
          
          You may enjoy my post apocalyptic novel "2136" as well. Have a great day! :)

genk01

@NOGenres WOW!! You really know how to make someone feel special. That's so kind of you to say. Thank you so much! :)
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NOGenres

@genk01 A great story is made by a great writer,and you sir...is a great writer.
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