Taedreamer02

I see you added " Sweet Dreams to your " Needs a lot of Work " list.
          I am eager to hear your critique so that I can improve.

NOTyourACCOUN7

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Taedreamer02

@NOTyourACCOUN7 thank you very much for the feedback.  It is really appreciated.  " Perfect" was the first story I ever wrote, " Sweet Dreams" the second.  Looking back I can see the development of my voice as a writer and the build of my confidence.  In the beginning I was just translating my thoughts to "paper".
            Thank you for reading the rest and giving me another shot - and for taking the time to give an honest and helpful critique!!  I will strive to always improve!! Stay warm and happy reading!!
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NOTyourACCOUN7

@Taedreamer02 I also finished the Unrivaled series, well, to be specific, i have finished the Unrivaled and Unburdened books.  
            
            As far as the Unveiled book, I’ve read what has been published, so far. Looking forward to its completion. 
            
            More power and always stay safe.
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