
Mafiaboss01809970
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For the first time I wrote a story. Can you give me suggestions how to improve it. I was trying my best to give a better story. But you are pro max level. You know better than me. That's why I wanted your opinion. Now I uploaded 2 parts https://www.wattpad.com/story/391991472?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Mafiaboss01809970

NadiyaKhan971
@Mafiaboss01809970 just keep up the good work dear... you'll improve with each step ♥️
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