Mafiaboss01809970

For the first time I wrote a story. Can you give me suggestions how to improve it. I was trying my best to give a better story. But you are pro max level. You know better than me. 
          That's why I wanted your opinion. Now I uploaded 2 parts 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/391991472?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Mafiaboss01809970

Mafiaboss01809970

@NadiyaKhan971 Thank you  sister (⁠ ⁠◜⁠‿⁠◝⁠ ⁠)⁠♡
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NadiyaKhan971

@Mafiaboss01809970 just keep up the good work dear... you'll improve with each step ♥️ 
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begonia_08

Sis when are you gonna update??? I'm waiting ᕙ⁠(⁠ ⁠ ⁠•⁠ ⁠‿⁠ ⁠•⁠ ⁠ ⁠)⁠ᕗ

begonia_08

@NadiyaKhan971 ohkkk i didn't knew that. will wait for u. And best of luck for your exams.. fighting!!
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NadiyaKhan971

@kooktaeminyn when I'm done with my exams I'll surely post please wait a bit
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fapmoan

fapmoan

@fapmoan thank you so much 
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NadiyaKhan971

@fapmoan I'll surely look it up 
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ja3strah

Hello author! I'm here to tell you that how much i love your book. It was really good, a very simple yet unique plot story. I really love how you always post your stories on time and gave us the chapters of your stories. I appreciate your hard work. Keep it up Author! I'm waiting for your another story. I want you to wirtr your another story on some dark base story but its your choice to write on which you're comfortable with. Besides appreciate Lloyd of that, I'm really impressed by your writing style and i wish you luck in your writting journey❤

NadiyaKhan971

@ja3strah thank you so much for your sweet  words 
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