Hi! 
I realised all my drafts, of my books are laying in my notes, because I'm too scared to post. I'm not so good of a writer. The imagination is there, but the profesionalism is not. So if i ever post my work here, please don't judge me. 
When I posted Davoli's proposal, I was in hurry to post and didn't realise it needs to be redo* I will let the 5 chapters on, but in future I will take down the book to correct my mistakes. 
English in not my first language.*