@ShakiMoto The story is 66 chapters long x3 I promise it gets more interesting towards the middle and end >.< as of the earlier chapters (10 and below) it's a lot of stuff that builds up to the climax. It's a little tedious this way.
I do have another series named Kira's Dreams. Sadly it's super unknown on this site but that one starts out right away with the action. My newer novels have a lot of complications in the plot so sadly it needs a lot more background information to entirely understand the plot.
Thanks so much for the suggestion though ^^ I try to make the novel more interesting a few more chapters later x3 I wish I could just jump into the plot though x.x
@DrHeartBeats i read the synopsis. medyo gasgas na. pero if you would make it less clichè it'd be great. sorry, blunt talaga ako magcomment. please dont get offended.
sincerly, Shaki
@Chuchu_Erks uhm ate, humorous yung writing niyo, pero shallow yung plot. dont get offended. i give honest criticisms in order to improve your stories.
@OhEmBeyotchy, ssst! haha sorry late reply. about sa question mo, diba master ka nyan? di ko nga matuloy tuloy yung story ko at gusto ko na burahin pero di ko maburaaa!!!