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          Would love some feedback if you've got the time!!!

@RadicalTiger how what's spelled? I don't even know what you're talking about, do elaborate.

@tonguetide I HAVE ALREADY SAID A THOUSAND TIMES THAT I KNOW SHE HAS A LIFE. Like I said, it's not about the updates, it's about her being unreliable. if you have a hectic life don't set yourself an updating schedule which you will not meet. Do you want me to spell It out for you?

It's pretty pointless to leave rude comments when you want her update, isn't it? You honestly think that will make her update? More like make her sad. REALITY CHECK HUN EVERYONE HAS LIFE. NO JUST YOU

@RadicalTiger 'comments like yours really aren't going to be noticed or cared about' yet I've had lots of people down my throat for my comment, not to mention YOU must have CARED enough to actually reply back. I have said many times, to the point where it's gotten boring, that I know she has a life. My problem is setting a deadline, not meeting it on numerous occasions and then not even bothering to post a message saying why. If you look at her Twitter, she's been talking about getting a contract, alternating between writing zach's story and the last two chapter for TCPS and let's not forget, she's been replying to people saying she'll update soon. If she has time for Twitter then she has time to write a message for her supporters on here. It's not about getting an update, it's about her not sticking to her words. If you know your life is hectic don't deceive your readers by giving them an updating schedule and not meeting them. There are plenty of writers on here that make it known that they update when they can and I don't complain. If you need to read it one more time...it's not about getting an update, it's about being unreliable as hell.

@tonguetide you're *

@RadicalTiger I think I've said to many people that we also have lives, but we still manage to take time out to read and support her work yet she can't even take the time out to tell us why she hadn't updated?. I think it's common decency tbh. I don't need to 'grow up' thank you very much, don't try and judge my maturity off of one comment. Let's face it one comment is not a large enough sample size to be representative of my maturity. Just to let you know I have a right to say what I want, when I want, stop focusing on what I've said and go about your business. If the writer has a problem with my comment then she can tell me herself, you don't need to speak for her. Like I said, freedom of speech exists, Je Suis charlie?. 

@tonguetide yeah there's where your wrong, I did not demand for an update. I just stated why it's pretty shit that she hasn't already done that yet. 

@tonguetide no my life doesn't and I'm aware that hers doesn't either. What annoys me is her setting deadlines and barely ever meeting them, this has happened more than once. If you know that you're life can get hectic, DONT SET DEADLINES. If she hadn't of said I'll update by this date, I would not have said anything.

@Reikokoko and I can say whatever the hell I want.